I recently started writing haikus for fun. What's your opinion on these? I realize some of these are not true haikus, since they deal with human elements and some words end in ING, but I'm just trying my hand at them.
Sleeping angels stir,
As the dawn begins anew,
A new beginning.
The dragon breathes
The fire of creation,
Then he sleeps once more.
Grace under fire,
A cruel world to bare,
The triumph of you.
Softly spoken echos,
Of the cherished times gone by-
Our hearts remember.
Do you Haiku....opinions please?norten
Yeah I do but I seldom bother to write them down. If this is your work it's interesting and shows promise for a beginner. I think anyone who creates should accept early in the personal process that it's seldom that one spits out a Mozart like composition so reworking the the "rough" cut should not be above your efforts. Poems often evolve, save the notes from the conception but never be fearful to seek improvement, there aren't any rules stopping you. My final opinion is this, the poem you creat is yours alone; meant to please you hopefully, and only you know when it's right. Tootle ooo!
Do you Haiku....opinions please?panda
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